Arkansas Governor’s Council on Fitness
4815 West Markham Slot H 41
Little Rock, AR 72205
Fountain Lake High School
4207 Park Avenue
Hot Springs, AR 71901
To Whom It May Concern:
Several people have many different opinions on if vending machines should be removed. My answer to this question is yes they should be removed because of the food that’s in the vending machine such as: candy, chips, soda, etc. are readily available for students to get a hold of and that will add to the increase of obesity in the United States. Instead of the vending machines being removed they should be controlled with the good contents instead of bad ones and make sure that what they are selling is healthy and good for people. By having good contents in the machines it could help with the obesity instead of increasing the obesity in the Untied States.
-Please help, I don’t know if this sounds right or not and i have no idea how to finish it in order to be a page long or 3 paragraphs. Pleaseeee helpppp due tomorrow??-
make a paragraph talking about nutricious snacks compared to the unhealthy ones
and WHY it woukd be good to have healthy ones in dont just state the answer explain the answer
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It needs to be edited a little. In beginning, you say ‘yes’ the vending machines should be removed, then you imply they shouldn’t when you say the machines should instead be offering healthy choices.
How about this:
To Whom It May Concern:
There are many different opinions on whether vending machines should be removed from public school buildings due to the overwhelming rise in obesity that is so prevalent in today’s society. The typical choices available to students from the common vending machine are typically limited to various chips, candies, and other high-fat content selections.
(Here you add a paragraph about the danger of obesity, add a few statistics and such.)
I believe that the answer to this problem is not to remove the vending machines, but to change the items offered in them. (List a few alternatives to replace the ones currently found in vending machines) Instead of the usual selections, the healthier items could be offered, thereby encouraging the youth of today to make better choices in regards to their health, and better insuring that they won’t become a statistic when it comes to the measurement of obesity in the United States.
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