would you should i read this?

here is my into for i book i am just playing around with called Life As A Small Town Girl-

I woke up a storm was here. A hurricane had hit Texas and it was affecting my same town in Arkansas. I had moved here to live with my father, a small town local cop. I walked out side to wake up. The wind was strong enough to make my hair a disaster zone. The rain was icy cold and had a sharp sting to it. I floated out of the sky like glitter going on a two year olds mother’s day gift. As I came back to reality I realized that a tree was creaking and was fall where I stood. I was doomed was the thought that ran through my mind. Some where I felt a force that was unreal. I some how had moved out of the way of the crashing tree. I was stunned so I ran inside and got ready. What had happened I thought what moved me? I was right there wasn’t I. I thought and went over it a million times in my head while I was taking my shower and getting ready for my first day at school.

As I was walking out the door a note caught my eye. From dad of course. He never writes a “note” it always was a letter. It read;

Good morning my baby doll,
I know you have always gone to a big school but our school is small. You will be in high school of course but so will 7th -12th. So as you can see we are so small. I have a copy of your schedule attached to this letter also with an envelope of money so you can go shopping at Hot Springs or Little Rock you can go to any place you want. I also have bought you a cell phone I hope you like it. It is an I-phone. The guy at the store said you will love it. Your laptop is in your back seat for school. It already has every thing you need installed thanks to Dakota, a local kid that knows almost every thing. I have to go baby have a good day at school.

Love you,
You father

Wow I thought that was short. I thought as I ran out side to my new car, a Volvo. Sure enough a new phone and laptop was in the back seat and so was a note in my seat. I stuffed it in my purse with my money and everything else. I backed out of the driveway a headed to Ouachita High School. A new life new people and a new town what could be better I thought, but little did I know what my years in Friendship would hold

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oh yeah this is the thing that gose on the back you the book man i forgot what it is called would you read it